Hello,
As Luna stated, the first part looks decent but it already has the main issue of the video which is that you rely a bit too much on Twitch to build your synch and those RGB twitches are very distracting. It's a template we have seen countless time, they're very noticeable and not only that but used with an anime which has a medieval setup like this, it definitely looks out of place.
Still, the first part had good enough scene selection and dynamic to make you go higher in the ranking, what really dragged you down is the second part where scenes becomes way longer and repetitive, more synchs are overlooked or loosely synched with constant rgb twitches and it becomes the main focus for the rest of the video.
It was not necessarily worse than some of the videos above it but it has video-killers issue that made it look less clean and controlled overall. Basically I would probably have been able to appreciate it a lot more with less RGB twitches and more diversity in scene selection on the second part. Keep it up!