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Ok this time I swear, last amv XD
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Great atmosphere in the slower part :3 Action part was good aswell. Only thing that bothered me a bit was the anime song combo in generell, cause the lyrics didn't really fit that particulary well with Samurai Champloo. Not saying it doesn't work, it's just that they don't adress something improtant in the show Razz Good Luck Very Happy
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Great atmosphere in the slower part :3 Action part was good aswell. Only thing that bothered me a bit was the anime song combo in generell, cause the lyrics didn't really fit that particulary well with Samurai Champloo. Not saying it doesn't work, it's just that they don't adress something improtant in the show Razz Good Luck Very Happy

I knew it was a bit if a risky combination but dunno, I really liked the way it looked in my head xD thank you
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I think your clip has the best atmosphere on all the action category, very pleasant to watch !
Maybe sometimes the rhythm is too slow, but it's not dramatic, I liked your work man [Action] Castaway - Danparthenis 3772035131

The best scene:
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Hello!

We have seen countless samurai champloo AMV but I felt like discovering new scenes in yours. Very nice atmosphere in the first part. The action part felt way weaker though with very few good impacts and questionable flow.

Good job nevertheless
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Hello!

We have seen countless samurai champloo AMV but I felt like discovering new scenes in yours. Very nice atmosphere in the first part. The action part felt way weaker though with very few good impacts and questionable flow.

Good job nevertheless
yes, new scenes
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I think your clip has the best atmosphere on all the action category, very pleasant to watch !
Maybe sometimes the rhythm is too slow, but it's not dramatic, I liked your work man [Action] Castaway - Danparthenis 3772035131

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XD Thanks Nyala, dunno but I am considering making it the thumbnail of my vid lmao. I tried to work to my strengths with this vid, action editing is my weakest genre but, really hoping to improve!
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MagicDarkLight wrote:
Hello!

We have seen countless samurai champloo AMV but I felt like discovering new scenes in yours. Very nice atmosphere in the first part. The action part felt way weaker though with very few good impacts and questionable flow.

Good job nevertheless

Thank you MDL, I always avoided action cause I knew it was my weakest side however, I really want to improve in it. Still experimenting on getting that flow and impact in my edits. Eventually I hope to get it right Smile
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