Hey peco,
Scene selection was relying a bit too much on how cool the scenes are and not really on how cool they should flow together. The video in itself was not bad but it made it kind of forgettable even if you still had some fun parallels (the grids and other stuff). I understood what you tried to do with your pace but it didn't feel that connected to the music and the second part is really random for me.
Good job though o/