Hello!
That wasn't bad, the atmosphere is solid, the impacts are there. But my issue is with your FX, they are a bit too forced onto the video, the colors are really too saturated and the particle effect in the beginning was overwhelming.. I think you can do good stuff but try to focus on fx that helps you improving the editing and not just try to add stuff for the sake of personalization.
Still a solid video apart from that, good job!