Hello ! Effectively, your editing is pretty dynamic, looks fun to made it !
Your choice of various, multi-animes is not really relevant when it's not for a crossover concept. There are a lot of good scenes, but the animes looks too different (chara design, atmosphere, style...) and we are lost very quicly in your amv.
If you works on your anime choice, I'm pretty sure you'll edit something really better the next time. Btw, it's a pretty cool AMV man, good job !