Hey
It was interesting, visually pretty and all but I think the story was a bit forced with all those texts. It was ok in the first part but when he got mad and wanted to kill Subaru, it was making the pace way slower. And also I think it would have been more interesting to see Subaru stab kyon after seeing him date Haruhi for a bit or something like that because there we just don't really get why he's like that.
Still an interesting vid, good job there