Hello!
Very interesting scene selection where they're all having a real party with drunk people and all and then crashing out at the beach, seemed realistic XD But I'll agree with Luna that was a bit slowish at times and the scenes I pointed out was just a part of the video which is actually a bit too classical overall, also I thought the overlays were added a bit too thoughtlessly.
Would have been so cool if it had the same concept on the whole video (but hard with anime I'll admit). Still a nice dance Jade, good job and good luck!