Hello
The FX part is fine, even though I though the texts and 2D overlays were a bit too much. However, despite having a good association, I think you missed the point when it comes to synch and pace in this video and it's a pity because it had good potential. I think it's hard to be forgiving with synch/pace when you know another AMV making a much better job at it.
Good job though and congratz on 1st place I guess xD