Didn't knew that anime, good luck !

Thanks, man.

Hello

It was ok until the song takes off and the old man got stabbed. Here it became apparent that you couldn't handle the variation in the song, the pace never changes and the synchs are really light. Furthermore the use of radial blur is not good, you can't just put it to synch, it has to be a bit more logical.
Overall, it lacked implication, it wasn't terrible but nothing really hooked me, good luck.