Well, i think that the intro it's too long mate.Put those credits at the ending of the video. You're missing many things in your amv... but i'm a bad explainer or how that word is called xD ... The sync is low, i think you just added scenes that you thought it fits the lyrics . Some parts looked random to me. I don't think that this watermark will help you too much, so you should remove it from your future edits. As i said, i'm not bad at giving explanations , so hopefully this little stuff that i've said here will help you . Good Luck.
NotedNinjaAssassin New
Messages : 7 Age : 30 Registration date : 2016-02-19
Subject: Thanks for the feedback :D Thu 31 Mar 2016 - 23:55
I wasn't really sure if I wanted the intro to be that long either, however once I started to mess around with it I really liked how it ended up. I can see why people say it doesn't belong in the beginning. Next time I will put it at the end, I think it would of been better that way. I was more consetrated on the sync of the lyrics than the sync of the actual scenes with the music beats, I can see where you might of thought I just added it randomly and you are right, I just wanted it to look cool . I only add the watermark because I have had people taking my videos and using them as their own, can't really do anything about it . But thanks for taking time and giving me feedback on my video, next one will be great!
lokkiclu Soul's Team
Messages : 283 Age : 27 Location : United Kingdom Registration date : 2015-02-08
It's not bad for a start, but there's still a lot lacking in your video when it comes to sync, not to mention there's virtually no theme going on so most of it looks random. Plus as stated above, those credits have no place in the beginning of your clip.
If you want to make a mix, try combining your sources as you go along rather than having individual sections with each anime. I would also recommend to try and work with a concept/main idea next time, it will do wonders
Good luck and keep going
NotedNinjaAssassin New
Messages : 7 Age : 30 Registration date : 2016-02-19
It's not bad for a start, but there's still a lot lacking in your video when it comes to sync, not to mention there's virtually no theme going on so most of it looks random. Plus as stated above, those credits have no place in the beginning of your clip.
If you want to make a mix, try combining your sources as you go along rather than having individual sections with each anime. I would also recommend to try and work with a concept/main idea next time, it will do wonders
Good luck and keep going
Thanks man, I actually had a script before I started but for me it was hard to stay with it. I can see how having a consept/main idea could really help me out in the end, next time for sure I will have some kind of story. Thanks again for watching and giving me feedback