It was so obvious that someone will edit this song with FATE series haha ;D
Saw some good timing moment in it and the part on 2:07 killed me, wow!
There was something like a glitch on 1:09? It looks like a simple overlay put on a mode like add/screen. I think it would have been better if you would have used "real glitches". All in all i feel like some scenes were too long and should have been shorter with more action kind of change.
Good luck in the ic!