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 [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC]

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PostSubject: [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC]   [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC] Icon_minitimeWed 18 Feb 2015 - 4:22

Hi everyone, this is an AMV i made for EST IC and well i want to know where i can improve. So i came for criticism...xD
don't hold back tell me what you think and what i should do...;D

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PostSubject: Re: [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC]   [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC] Icon_minitimeFri 1 May 2015 - 5:58

I don't much like the white flashes you have throughout the video. It's disturbing to flow. I think you could work more on your sync. It seems you kind of just left the pacing as it was without doing much to truely match it up with the music. A little random with your scene selection. I suggest finding a central theme to follow so that it can be more engaging for the viewer. Overall not bad though Smile
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PostSubject: Re: [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC]   [Koyomi] Lonely Dance [EST IC] Icon_minitimeTue 5 May 2015 - 18:37

haha this song XD

I like your flow! too bad it's too slow. Also like Jazzy said i did not understand your scenes selections sometimes ( like the section with aldnoah zero, i felt like you just wanted to fill your amv with random scenes )
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