Finally someone who edited the same song as me (fuck this crazy in love shit) more than just we also have edited the same director (Shinkai, this song is so obvious with him !). Now let's talk about your clip.
First it's obviously beautiful, you can't go wrong with shinkai's work. Then did you try to tell us something ? Do you have a plot ? I have this feeling that you are trying to tell us something but i just can't figure out what. I don't think a storyline is needed, especially when we are talking about an amv created in 3 days and with crossroads as a main anime (2 min commercial...)
Your editing is clean and contemplative which is required on this kind on music. I see some flaws (sorry) :
- I should ban you from this forum for these audio cuts, though.
- This song is created around a rallentando <=> piu mosso cycle, it's how we call this in music theory. In common language we would say it's slow then the rythm goes up, then it slows down again. I don't think you did well on this part. If I had to represent this song i'd draw something like :
__/\___/\___/\___ but your editing is rather ______/////
As an advice, as far as i can say this, you should really work on your movement between and inside the scene sometimes your cuts are just to rough for me brooo.
Good luck !