Hello
It wasn't particularly bad but I didn't like it for several reasons. The pace is too strong in the beginning, this song is quite hard to edit to because it's so slow for so long but still, that's a problem, especially since you kinda fail the drop for me. It needed a bit more than just zooms in eyes and pretty tunnels. Also your transitions aren't clever/clean enough for me and the scene selection was a bit weird (a bit random). This end was quite abrupt too.
Sorry I only made critics but it wasn't a bad watch, I just think you could have done much better, I don't think you're used to edit this style so that might explain it. Anyways, good luck!