Hello,
Here we prefer to share amv with download link to judge and enjoy more the work you provide so please give us a download link next time
About the amv your compositing work is quite nice the fx and scenes personalisation are pretty interesting in some place even if it does look a bit too much sometimes especially on the pink cc, your zooms that are often a bit too abrupt and not good in term of proportions and some fonts a bit too fat 3D stuff for a romance amv.
The editing though lacks a lot of stuff, i can see some frames blending at some point which is a big problem or mb it's just a bad crossfade either way it looks kinda weird,the amv also lacks a bit of pace and it is too short for it to be really enjoyable so next time try to apply your fx work maybe more spread over the video and make it a full amv.
Anyway you sure got skillz as fadoo say you have a big potential and if you work hard and well to improve your editing i'm sure you'll be a great editor.
Cya