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PostSubject: [Action] Hot Blooded - BecauseImBored1   [Action] Hot Blooded - BecauseImBored1 Icon_minitimeTue 4 Mar 2014 - 23:40

Yeah.... time crunches hurt
100% plan to remake this entirely lol

Anime: K Project
Song: Phoenix by Fall Out Boy

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5V9bEOxU2hLa3V0aGVYNDQ0dGc/edit?usp=sharing
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strong raw action alert XD
great placement of scenes, was enjoyable
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Not bad like you were saying it was.
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It's really weird seeing someone else edit with the same song sometimes. In any case, this really isn't that bad. I'd try to work on your dynamic flow... some of your slow portions didn't seem too different from the fast ones. Apart from that, work on the sync and scene selection a bit and you've got a great video. Nice job with some of your motion / zooms, I wasn't expecting that from you!
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Not bad at all, it's a good work man ! [Action] Hot Blooded - BecauseImBored1 3772035131
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Good job kp~
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Glad you were brave enough to post this, Kp, you're always your harshest critic. I enjoyed it.
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Lol thanks guys! Already fixed alot of it @_@
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hey not bad KP! just the text at the beginning is bothering me
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Yeah it was a weird part of the anime I should have never used...at least its not the opening XD.....or was it some weird one time opening thing XD oh well
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Hello

I liked it overall, actually what mainly motivated its loss of rank was this intro with credits actually. But yeah I personnaly don't think that's that obvious when you haven't seen the anime. Well of course it's not the only problems, the editing overall is good but especially on the 2nd part. In the first choruses I could see some long and/or static scenes and the pace seemed a bit slower than expected imo. Otherwise it was quite clean, good job!
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Thanks for the feedback!! Yeah the gang members name at the intro was a bad idea and there are not as many action scenes as I remembered in this anime XD I'll fix it up before I officially release it :3
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