[Fun] Kiriforce - Tommy-Gun-Byou

New Messages : 16 Registration date : 2014-03-02

That Tommy-Gun...

That weekend was pretty funny, yet, very exhausting and it's a relief I am done.^^
Actually not much to say about it, hope you get affected by the Tommy-Gun-Byou!
Leave some feedback :3

Anime:Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!
Music: Royal Republic - Tommy-Gun
Video: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/121926105/%5BFun%5D%5BKiriforce%20%2B%20Team%20Tanja%5D%20Tommy-Gun-Byou.mp4

YT:

Forum Member Messages : 113 Registration date : 2013-02-25

Entertaining source combo and some funny moments, but lip sync was very off and text was way too all over the place.

Soul's Team Messages : 231 Registration date : 2012-02-28

aweome work Erik Smile

New Messages : 41 Registration date : 2012-02-28

ok this is the right thread... then again:
FUKINTOMMYGUNPOWERBOOOOOM!!!!

haha this IS IN FACT my fav this time... nice worke little big nosed boy ¦3

New Messages : 40 Registration date : 2010-12-17

really not bad Erik! Smile

I had this song stuck in my mind for houuuurs! would have been nice if you could have build more tommy guns in it...but the time. I know... Wink

Subject: Re: [Fun] Kiriforce - Tommy-Gun-Byou Wed 5 Mar 2014 - 4:33

i'll aggree with mchy, lips and texts wasn't a real necessity in this one, and considering the fact font color was off as well as lip syncing at certain times, it mostly crippled it.

Still an enjoyable source choice for the song. There was some gold moments Smile

Subject: Re: [Fun] Kiriforce - Tommy-Gun-Byou Wed 5 Mar 2014 - 4:51

This kalash AMV !

KALASH SPOILER:

Funny clip, with some weird typo incrustation but still a good job [Fun] Kiriforce - Tommy-Gun-Byou 3772035131

New Messages : 16 Registration date : 2014-03-02

Thank you guys for your feedback so far! Very Happy

After watching it again after the IC I agree on what u said about the lips and some timings.
I'll try to improve that in the next ICs! First problem may be my time management.^^
If you laughed at the end nontheless my goal is achieved anyway.
I Think I almost laughed the whole time editing it and I am glad if you felt that Very Happy

Fun category should bring fun! ^.^

Subject: Re: [Fun] Kiriforce - Tommy-Gun-Byou Fri 7 Mar 2014 - 18:44

It is fun for me. You managed to bring the source in theme with the song - great job on that. Lyric synch is awesome too. It didn't feel wrong at all. Sure lipsynch and text could be better, but it's an IC, so it's not a big deal for me. Good Luck!

Subject: Re: [Fun] Kiriforce - Tommy-Gun-Byou Sat 15 Mar 2014 - 16:48

Hello

Not bad overall but some stuff really dragged your work down: first the accelerated scenes. I know somehow you may use it as a "fun" effect but here, no, I didn't feel like the song was suitable for this and also when there are lipflaps they get even more annoying.
Then the texts, yeah what bugged me was how thick they looked and the blur disappearance wasn't really clean.
And finally yeah classic complaints about messy cam moves, rough mask transitions Surprised

But that was enjoyable, I liked the grenade part XD

Good job