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PostSubject: [Dance] Frontier ~ Whisper in my ear   [Dance] Frontier ~ Whisper in my ear Icon_minitimeSun 24 Feb 2013 - 23:19

hey guys this is my video in Dance category i hope you like it. yeah i know some things in the video are fail xD but i learn from this


Music: Luminary-Amsterdam
Duration: 3:20
Team: Beats Team


DLL http://www.mediafire.com/?xm5lqp67no2vni9

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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Frontier ~ Whisper in my ear   [Dance] Frontier ~ Whisper in my ear Icon_minitimeMon 25 Feb 2013 - 23:25

Not bad , but some transitions weren't clean and the pace isn't really well followed , some things ruined the video too like the flares , anyway good luck Smile
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Frontier ~ Whisper in my ear   [Dance] Frontier ~ Whisper in my ear Icon_minitimeWed 6 Mar 2013 - 17:46

Hello

Sorry I didn't like it, firstly I didn't like much how you dealt with colors, some parts were just too saturated and bright and then you go to darker scenes with hardly any transition. Also yeah, the rythm wasn't good, you have to follow better the song or else it will look just like some beautiful scenes put one after another but without any real link with the song.

But anyways, keep it up, good luck!
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