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PostSubject: [Action] VividRadiation    [Action] VividRadiation  Icon_minitimeMon 25 Feb 2013 - 0:06

Drawing power straight from the source of the whole world's energy, these girls are Radioactive and will fight anyone or anything that threatens it!



Song: Radioactive
Artist: Imagine Dragons
Anime: Vividred Operation
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation    [Action] VividRadiation  Icon_minitimeMon 25 Feb 2013 - 23:45

Not bad but it lacks transitions/impact ...
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation    [Action] VividRadiation  Icon_minitimeTue 26 Feb 2013 - 1:08

Draga wrote:
Not bad but it lacks transitions/impact ...

If you could elaborate with some suggestions to how I could improve, that would be wonderful.
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation    [Action] VividRadiation  Icon_minitimeFri 1 Mar 2013 - 19:28

Hi!

I agree with Draga, you could have speeded up a little during the chorus, it was kinda slow, too much cuts too and your cam moves could have been cleaner if you had used better the blur.
It's not "bad", but it's just not really interesting since there're so many cuts and a little boring because we're never totally amazed by your flow of scenes since that's too slow

Keep it up Wink
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