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Notes de la rédaction: Cette vidéo m'a pris beaucoup de temps pour le faire et j'ai aussi rencontré de nombreux problèmes lors de l'édition de cette vidéo. J'ai utilisé Sony Vegas pour la plupart des AMV, mais utilisé Adobe After Effects pour les effets tels que le bruit de télévision, Twitch, et flou des bordures noires. Dans l'ensemble, je suis heureux avec cette vidéo, même si personne d'autre n'est, j'ai beaucoup appris dans les intro et outro de ma vidéo en particulier avec tous les effets de la que j'ai fait.

Merci personnelle:
Je tiens à remercier Neon, Zane, Corsair et Replay pour la bannière, encodage Aide et m'a appris à faire les intro et outro comme je le faisais.

Avis final: Dans l'ensemble, cet AMV a fini assez bien, mais maintenant j'y repense, il ya beaucoup, je voudrais avoir fixé et rendu mon AMV ont un meilleur débit et une sélection de scènes. J'ai aussi appris quelques zooms yeux et des transitions à travers le mouvement du clip lui-même. Honnêtement, je pense que mon AMV a obtenu dans un endroit plus élevé, il aurait dû, mais c'est juste moi.

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AMV:
Asphyxiation Association


Anime:
Final Fantasy - Advent Children


Music:
Erasus - Subkulture ft Celldweller


Software:
Sony Vegas 10 & Adobe After Effects CS4


Format:
Mp4


Size:
129 MB


FPS:
23.97


Time To Complete:
1 1/2 mois


Competition:
Japan Expo 2011


Place:
24th


Streaming Link (720p):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mnyM4jvUZI


Download:
http://www.mediafire.com/?0t35z3e32dboh53
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PostSubject: Re: [Arcturus/Seraph] Asphyxiation Association (JE2011) -24th-   [Arcturus/Seraph] Asphyxiation Association (JE2011) -24th- Icon_minitimeSat 9 Jul 2011 - 4:04

Yo dude =)

I think I already told you what I think of your amv, simple, watchable, good editing overall. But here a couple of things I think you should work on :

major think here, it's TOO LONG. 4min of FFAC pale you should go for 2-3min for a good amv(I don't count the intro and credits here).

I think you could have chosen some better scenes, I think I already told you, but the scenes with the kids just doesnt feel right in here.

Some of the scenes were too long, kid with the cellphone, some fighting scenes like the one with sephiroth or the other guy with white short hair. it just looks like you put the whole scenes there or just some fade in/fade out to keep the fighting scene play. I think you could have edited the scene a little more to make it go better with the song and that we dont feel like we are just watching the whole fight from the movie =)

And the slow part is just too long. I can't read what your intro said and your credits sometimes, I need to put the video on pause to read it. And you know for your lipsync =P

Anyways, it still is a good amv that you can easily watch, FFAC fans will like this amv Razz Good job on your ranking, 24 on like 100 and +, pretty good man! Wink
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Totally agree, looking back this needs so much work, Hence why im surprised it got rank 24 lol
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Like i said before Kendrick. I liked its simplicity, but i also disliked it. Ya know? 24th Place Kudos. :'D
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tu parle français seraph depuis quand Mad
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Fadoo-Sama wrote:
tu parle français seraph depuis quand Mad
depuis qu'il sait utiliser google trad XD
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L’ENFOIRÉ !!

j'avais déjà commenté sur skype ^^
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Vous n'avez pas la preuve Vlex Razz
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J'adore ! Un montage propre, une qualité magnifique même si c'est la version Bluray, des frissons ! C'est bien un amv sur FF quand c'est bien fait, Good Job !
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sorry for the epic wait:

there's some point i disliked: some long scenes and the lenght particulary.
it could have got more epicness by being shorter i think.

and the screams in the song could have been epic if they were lip synced.too bad it wasn't exploited

actually i never watched FFAC but i liked the "story" you put, there was quite good scenes fitting with the lyrics, in my opinion. and the "god erase us" was well fitting with the apocalyptic situation: ruins and corruption for example. that's a FF AMV which was kinda interesting to watch, which is not easy to do, considering it's overused. but i think this amv have more "subjective appreciation" if it's on a big screen.

finally, a enjoyable amv, which is efficent despite his flaws.

congrats for the ranking,buddy! i hope you'll continue making amvs. Wink
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Excellente j'ai vraiment aimé, vraiment je n'ai à me voir que Final Fantasy est très intéressant
certainement de bonne qualité, comme vous faites pour avoir une qualité comme ça?
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