Hello Kaishot

Your video was okay but I feel like you should have worked more on impact, pace and scene selection. Everything about it felt a bit under what was expected. Regarding fx, I think you should make the colors more homogeneous and contrasted. The comps looked not bad but they didn't flow so well together and the pace was a bit forgettable.

Good job on this though, keep it up

Thanks for the criticism, several people tell me the same but well I'm still in the process of learning, I'll keep in mind thank you ^^