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Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest Dirty_10

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Music: Dirty Bitch - Hardwell
I started this amv the next day that it finished the ST IC, because I didn't like my amv and I thought that I need to practice new effects and more things.
Enjoy ^-^ Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest 408353
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Nice ideas, but you need to improve in camera movment and dynamics because it's a bit slow Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest 653287824
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not bad ^^
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Dn@ wrote:
Nice ideas, but you need to improve in camera movment and dynamics because it's a bit slow Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest 653287824
O.o ty!. Okeey I'll improve it for the next project Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest 653287824

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not bad ^^
e.é thank you! ^^
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Not bad. Some of the text felt like it was not needed though ^^
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Replay Studios wrote:
Not bad. Some of the text felt like it was not needed though ^^
Mmm yes thats true D: I don't know haha when while I was making the amv I was like.. okey I need to put more text and then more and then mooo....re and finally I hadn't thought about the final result u.ú
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Too much typos, not enough editing for me =(
Also your pan/zooms are way too rough, you need to work on that
Good luck for your next one Señor Gafudo

Love your covers btw Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest 517892
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Creed wrote:
Too much typos, not enough editing for me =(
Also your pan/zooms are way too rough, you need to work on that
Good luck for your next one Señor Gafudo

Love your covers btw Dirty Bitch - Hanibi-ni contest 517892
Thank you for your review Sr.Creed e.é. I'll still working on that points :3
Yeah xD while I was watching the ST's mep of the ic I was listening to this song, and I said oh god I think this could be very op, then I told the idea to elerye and she said ~ the song sucks but... "There is no eggs" Thats the reason why I decided to make it xD
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