I really enjoyed editing this, even though it was different from what I usually do. Tried to create my own storyline with some manips, especially the ending. (And i managed to sneak some of my favorite Anime in, yays :pp)

There, have some over-the-top cliché! Hope you enjoy it   

Lacks dynamics in some places, but it was interesting story-wise.Your editing is clean and simple, but efficient. It's easy to watch.

Song is crap. I would have enjoyed your amv even more with another song xD. But you used Golden Time, so i can forgive you.  

It's really awesome work Anna! I agree hahaha the song is not so nice (not that we had many good options) but your editing totally makes up for it. I love it a lot XD

Hey, great ideas here ! Your edit is clean, it's a good work for me   

Nice job, Anicsi! Good luck to you (:

Thanks everyone! Didn't think the song would be that hated, even though I also don't like it much HAHA. Maybe I should have chosen a different one after all, but it was the only one that was as much 'over the top' as the idea I had. Anyway, I'm happy if you enjoy it despite the song!   

Really enjoyed this one, love this kind of amvs that are clean and show the story perfectly    
Good luck!

Ahh you had great job presenting the story, really enjoyed the whole thing, nice job!

Thank you both! I'm happy I made the story work ^^

Kain-x-Spirits wrote:

Lacks dynamics in some places, but it was interesting story-wise.Your editing is clean and simple, but efficient. It's easy to watch.

Song is crap. I would have enjoyed your amv even more with another song xD. But you used Golden Time, so i can forgive you.  

this *2 . also the text overlaying each other in rotation, it'S aa shame cause we can read them fully.


Besides that, all's fine. i saw what you can do at akross. Keep on rollin' !

golden time instant fav! also nice editing, good stuff   

I liked this. There are some rough edges in places, but my biggest issue was the text at 2:16, which should have been much more concise and proofread. Still, good stuff overall.

this song was in the pack??   xDDD
nway the vid was really enjoyable   
good luck!

Thank you, guys! And yeah, that text *facepalms* I did it at the same speed as in the anime, when I previewed it, it looked fine. But in the final render it was too fast and not all readable ;'( Totally agree with you here! Thanks for the constructive criticism. ^^

(And yeah, EVERYONE i've talked to by now has some sort of OMGTHATSONGISPOOP reaction, so... *cough* XD)

That song was one of the biggest troll we had on skype, since the start of the ic never thought someone would actually edit it and do something not bad with it xD

So, good job !

Dn@ wrote:

That song was one of the biggest troll we had on skype, since the start of the ic never thought someone would actually edit it and do something not bad with it xD

So, good job !

Hahah, aw, man, when i saw the song in the folder, I was like: 'seriously?' And then like: there are TWO versions of it, does anyone actually LIKE this song???
But since I didn't feel like editing any of the other songs, I had to suck it up and start editing :p
You guys are mean! haha

Hey!

SERIOUSLY O_O I think (hope) Cross doesn't like this song too haha Good job for actually making something good on this song. The ideas were interesting, it was a good idea to make the guy watch romance animes, though I have to say this SP logo really looked cheap. I don't think it looks that much like a TV logo, actually.

The story was easy to follow but I didn't really like the part at 1:26, I understood she's somehow a lesbian and she found out her gf is a whore but since I didn't see that coming at all, I think it was a bit weird in the narration (and, just imo quite sick as well, what the fuck is wrong with this party and this stick haha but whatever).

From 0:30 till 0:50 I thought some parts were quite fast for the song, the transitions were maybe too strong and the scenes too short when compared with the rest of the video. So yeah, overall it's quite slow though, I know this anime is static but I felt like some parts needed a bit more dynamics.

Anyways, it was a good job overall, especially on this song but as expected, it wasn't an easy one and I think you had a hard time dynamising your editing which may cause the video to look a bit too linear sometimes. Good job nevertheless

Hey there, thanks for the feedback Uhh, well, okay, i guess for someone who hasn't watched the anime the party-scene can be misleading xD I wanted to manipulate the scenes I had to create a shortened, clear storyline, but including those scenes was misleading, then.

They aren't lesbians, the short haired dude is a guy xD He was on a costume party dressed as a girl waitress and flirting with another girl there, that's why his girlfriend got mad lol
No lesbians there, though xD

Probably my personal fav in romance and I thought it deserved 1st as well.

Mycathatesyou wrote:

Probably my personal fav in romance and I thought it deserved 1st as well.

Thanks, man Glad you enjoyed it!